The clip is very well timed and you used the perfect amount of pausing to make it fit well. Your sequence follows the clip and also works well. Ideas are well organized the only thing you might want to make a bit more clear is your main idea.
Style- Very clear and articulate, I could understand every word you said, very well practiced. My only critique would be to cut the clip sound while you are talking, because it becomes distorted. I'm not saying remove all clip sound, but maybe only use it when you are quiet.
You present your information very clearly and your main idea can be seen throughout the clip. In addition, it's easy to follow your line of reasoning and it's developed well. The only critique I have is to make sure you stay focused throughout the clip.
I'm not quite clear on what, exactly, the movement is revealing; how he "uses his intellect" is to be expected, I think, and it's not clearly a character trait. The supporting details are very rushed and I'm not seeing how your points support this notion of intellect. For example, how is pointing out contrast showing his intellect?
Your organisation was very good, your speech and presentation was well timed. Your thinking is done well, you explain all the right terms.
ReplyDeleteThe clip is very well timed and you used the perfect amount of pausing to make it fit well. Your sequence follows the clip and also works well. Ideas are well organized the only thing you might want to make a bit more clear is your main idea.
ReplyDeleteStyle- Very clear and articulate, I could understand every word you said, very well practiced. My only critique would be to cut the clip sound while you are talking, because it becomes distorted. I'm not saying remove all clip sound, but maybe only use it when you are quiet.
ReplyDeleteYou present your information very clearly and your main idea can be seen throughout the clip. In addition, it's easy to follow your line of reasoning and it's developed well. The only critique I have is to make sure you stay focused throughout the clip.
ReplyDeleteI'm not quite clear on what, exactly, the movement is revealing; how he "uses his intellect" is to be expected, I think, and it's not clearly a character trait. The supporting details are very rushed and I'm not seeing how your points support this notion of intellect. For example, how is pointing out contrast showing his intellect?
ReplyDeleteSome of the sentences are so rushed that I can't understand what you're saying.
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